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Thursday, January 3, 2019
Crazy, Cool Clouds
Mehran here i am doing a post about Crazy, Cool Clouds i hope you enjoy it. the cloud you are looking at looks kind of a tornado or just something cool or amazing.
You have described what you see the cloud as, I can definitely see the shape of a tornado like you said, maybe next time you could add some comparison photos to really show their similarities. Seeing them side by side would help us see the similarities better.
It would be great if you used a bit more detail and some adjectives to express what you are seeing. Why do you think it looks cool and amazing?
To me it looks like candy floss that is still being spun on to a stick. I can just imagine buying one now.
Hope your holiday is going great, keep working hard on your posts. :)
the cloud you are looking at 
Anyounghaseyo Mehran,
ReplyDeleteYou have described what you see the cloud as, I can definitely see the shape of a tornado like you said, maybe next time you could add some comparison photos to really show their similarities. Seeing them side by side would help us see the similarities better.
It would be great if you used a bit more detail and some adjectives to express what you are seeing. Why do you think it looks cool and amazing?
To me it looks like candy floss that is still being spun on to a stick. I can just imagine buying one now.
Hope your holiday is going great, keep working hard on your posts. :)
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Ms Tokuma.