My highlight for the two weeks was when me and my brother went to the park .
There was no one at the park so
We played on the flying fox and
The slide the slide was very wet.
This was my highlight because i got
To play with my little brother and
I got to have some fun.
4 minutes later
We got home. Then I was playing some games on my chromebook. the game was dynest.io then after I was watching some video too, I got to help my mum
Around the house and this was
My highlight because i got to
Play on my chromebook.
Then my lowlight was when me
And my brother got into a fight
And when my mum got mad on the
Holidays. This was my lowlight
Because me and my brother got in
To a fight.
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hi mehran i really like your blog post, liked how you told us what you did in the holiday, you can just add some more detail to what you liked and hat you saw , smell and herad. thank you by NICK
ReplyDeleteHello Mehran I really like how you told us about how your holiday went. Just to help you please put similes and adjectives.
ReplyDelete👋Hi Mehran,I really enjoy reading your Holiday highlights hope you had fun too. But you might also want to use some descriptive Language.
ReplyDeleteBut bye for now. Achsah 😉