I can see you have read up on some facts about New Zealand, ka pai you have written the first fact in your own words. Remember that although the activity is asking that you use the information on the linked website, you must make sure you paraphrase any information (put it in to your own words).
I can see you have read up on some facts about New Zealand. Remember that when using information on the linked website (as well as other online/offline sources), you must make sure you paraphrase any information (put it in to your own words).
Please rethink and edit your post to include two more chosen facts that have been paraphrased by you.
For future posts, please make sure that all your posts are written in your own words in order to make sure you receive full points for activities.
Keep working hard Mehran, you've made a great start to the Summer Learning Journey! :)
Talofa Mehran,
ReplyDeleteI can see you have read up on some facts about New Zealand, ka pai you have written the first fact in your own words. Remember that although the activity is asking that you use the information on the linked website, you must make sure you paraphrase any information (put it in to your own words).
I can see you have read up on some facts about New Zealand. Remember that when using information on the linked website (as well as other online/offline sources), you must make sure you paraphrase any information (put it in to your own words).
Please rethink and edit your post to include two more chosen facts that have been paraphrased by you.
For future posts, please make sure that all your posts are written in your own words in order to make sure you receive full points for activities.
Keep working hard Mehran, you've made a great start to the Summer Learning Journey! :)
Toe feiloa’i fo’i (see you again),
Ms Tokuma.